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Post by hrootbeer on Jun 26, 2011 16:38:46 GMT -6
I began my Differences in the Family Tree challenge in August of last year. Currently, I'm on the 7th generation which is the evil one. The link to the main site is here: The Twinbrook Fields If you want to start at the beginning, you can start here. I started this challenge with the express intent of working on my writing. My goal was to be less narrative (which is my weakness) and use more dialogue, active voice, and character and plot development. I consider each new generation a separate story even though they are all interconnected due to the nature of a "legacy". I hope you like it. I welcome any and all critique and comment even on old entries. I like to respond, too. Latest update: Candice Fields, Criminal: Chapter 7 7/4/11
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Post by MDPthatsme on Jun 26, 2011 17:55:14 GMT -6
I respect eveyone who can make legacies as, for some reason, I am FAIL at...I think I always have to have plots. Anywho, I'm glad you provided us with a link. ;D
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Post by hrootbeer on Jun 26, 2011 23:13:56 GMT -6
I respect eveyone who can make legacies as, for some reason, I am FAIL at...I think I always have to have plots. Anywho, I'm glad you provided us with a link. ;D This is my baby step into the realm of plotting a story for the Sims. I'm jealous of people's ability to do that. It is something I'd like to be able to do. As for the challenge, I sort of like having a goal to reach in my games. It keeps me playing.
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Post by hrootbeer on Jun 29, 2011 14:12:59 GMT -6
In my latest update, Candice finally gets what she wants but at what cost? JP is still up to something. And poor Glenna is dealing with her loss. Chapter 6
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Post by hrootbeer on Jul 4, 2011 18:55:23 GMT -6
In the latest update for The Twinbrook Fields, there is a lot of evil badness as Candice struggles with the reality of being a vampire. JP gives her a gift and Candice revises her plans...again. We also learn what JP was up to while Candice was in prison for a year.
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